Further Story Ideas

We got together today and discussed further ideas for our story. Any feedback/comments would be most welcome!

• Set inside a music box/display, showing small figurines ice skating.
• Two characters bump into each other and exchange glances. The keys which make them work start to turn slowly.
• One is less stable on the ice so the other helps them by holding their hands. This transforms into a dance and their keys turn faster.
• The background changes as the couple dance and the music builds to reflect their love.
• They kiss as the cityscape builds up around them.
• Fireworks follow the motion of the building and the camera follows the fireworks into the sky.
• The fireworks explode transitioning into explosions as war breaks out.
• The characters separate in a frenzy and the buildings start to fall down.
• Army marches through the scene.
• Building in the foreground falls down obscuring the screen.
• As the camera lifts up, we see the dust settling to show casualties and wreckage.
• Our characters appear slightly damaged and come together. They sound different from before as their parts are broken.
• As they embrace they slowly dance as they did when they first met.
• The keys that turn to make them work begin to turn again and they no longer sound broken.